Note: This was a poem that began after my husband and I watched two movies.
One about the apocalypse (sort of) and one manga movie about zombies. Both
just happened to quote TS Eliot's The Hollow Men. From there, I took on a prompt
to reverse the meaning of an already established poem. That exercise produced this.
Celestial Mechanics
Don’t write us as a comet,
its coma laden with dust
and ice. Don’t write a sonnet
about its white tail-end thrust
against the skyline. We’re not
a stellar comma, or rest,
but a full stop. Not the dot,
dot, dot of heartbeat in chest,
ellipses on Orion’s
belt, or an orbiting rock’s
return. We’re static ions,
colon on our bedside clock,
nebular burnout – so don’t.
I won’t write it if you won’t.


4 comments:
Im Sorry im sad
Very informative post. Thanks for taking the time to share your view with us.
I couldn’t resist commenting
God, rereading this--I love it of course--but it's like the B-side of a poem I wrote Chris eight years ago. Like, I'm pretty sure I have poems you've never read that rhyme some of these same images. Like, if I randomly found it on an old hard drive, I wouldn't doubt for a minute that I'd written it years ago and forgot. ANYway, I'm really here to send some love from NOLA. Oh, and tell Martin I ignored his Friend Request on Facebook on purpose. :P Keep doing it big in the big 3-0, M! xoxo
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